Thursday, December 12, 2013

Mini Concentration 2


For my mini Concentration, I did Bokeh.

2 comments:

  1. I really like yours, its so pretty! The description matches the photos. My favorite one is the eye its really clear and clean. I don’t have a least favorite one but I guess the middle one would be it, just cuz it’s a tiny bit blurry. Good job overall!! (:

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  2. I wish you had explained your idea/concentration more. Bokeh what? Bokeh why? What ties these together other than the shallow depth of field? You need to develop the idea more. As far as the photos…they look good but don’t show much variety. They look like they were all taken in the same room maybe at the same time. The first one is too busy with the lights (especially the wire) and the glass with text on it. The second works well compositionally but is a tad blurry. The third works compositionally and I like the lights in the eyes. You need to experiment and take more risks…

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